Friday, October 30, 2015

Feelings for the trip. (Sorry I posted this late)


     Fallon is driving with Harlan for the first few hours of the ride. I've kinda made a point to say they she's nerves about leaving home. She worried that if something happens she won't make it back in time.
     I want to make a point where Harlan falls asleep and starts snoring. Like Really loud and it freaks Fallon out so she stops at a gas station and buys coffee and water for them.
     I want Harlan to constantly be snacking the whole way. If they pass a sign that says there is a gas station or a market he has to stop and eat or pee. I want him to be so annoying with the stops that Fallon takes the wheel again just so they can keep going. I want to end this part with Harlan falling back asleep and snoring again.


      In the car with the boys I want them to be fighting over who gets to choose the music. So Gray Puts on something they both will like to stop the tension but Corbin lets the song play for only a few seconds before changing it to something else.
      However the sibling tension will subside when Corbin starts asking is Gray is going to be trying to hit on girls the whole time and they will laugh and it will be adorable.
      Corbin is kinda tense from the fight with their parents so to get his mind off it he starts play disney songs with the volume all the way up. Gray will sigh and sing along because even if he act tough he's secretly a disney prince.


I feel like I should describe their cars.

Fallon's Car
     I want to have a car that is this color. It doesn't have to be this model but it looked up a Kia forte koup because thats the car I have. (I'm not saying fallon is based off me..lol)
     I think this color is beautiful and I think it's something she would like.


Now the boy's car is kinda tricky (Why is everything for them hard to write?!) I want to give Gray a truck but I don't want him to be a stereotypical country boy. Ya know? But I don't want to gieve them some fancy car that they would never drive. I do know that I want it to be red,
I Like this one..
     I don't know if any of that will actually make it to the story. I guess i just wanted to make a point of it in case it does. I want my readers to come up with whatever they think the car would be... I dunno. Car stuff is hard.

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